Looking at it, I want some snarkier dialog. When I wrote it I didn't yet know much about the main character, now I know more and the dialog needs a polish to match the snark in further chapters.
- Badtux the Authorial Penguin
Postscript: Looked at it some more. Will post it shortly. Only minor snark additions needed. WTF, it's a first draft.
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